Recently, an increasing number of people express their concern about the phenomenon that they are gaining weight easily and become less healthy. In my opinion, this effect is mostly due to their modern unbalanced diet and lack of exercise.
With technology advancement, individuals are pursuing convenience in everything, especially food. After the introduction of fast food, burgers and microwaved meal boxes for instance, they tend to purchase these type of products which are relatively simpler to consume. These do not require any intricate seasoning or cooking process, not to mention the cleansing afterward. Indeed, most of the instant processed food products tasted more delicious than cooked meal. Many of them, however, contain high content of calories, fat, sugar and other preservatives with little nutritional value. Consequently, consuming too much instant meal are more likely to suffer from health problems like heart disease, obesity and hypertension, which could affect our health seriously.
Another main factor leading to certain problem is that modern people is usually lack of exercise. Growing older, the metabolic rate of human body will drop gradually. It means without exercise, the food taken might be harder to removed from the body. As a result, individuals will gain extra weight sooner than they thought. This is also a possible explanation of why obesity is usually found on aged patients.
An effective method to cope with this is to exercise adequately, at least thirty minutes per day. Not only keeping our heart and blood vessels healthy, but increased amount of exercise could also help us to lose weight through sweating. For example, instead of driving, go to work by riding bicycle, or get off the buses or train few stations earlier then walk could be an option. Other than enough exercise, people should pay more effort to balance their diet by adding more vegetables, fewer meat works well enough. It is believed that doing such could control our weight and keep us healthy effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...the buses or train few stations earlier then walk could be an option Other than enou...
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Message: Did you mean 'less meat'?
Suggestion: less meat
...ce their diet by adding more vegetables fewer meat works well enough It is believed that d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4901421252 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 324.0 20.2975951904 1596% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1672.0 106.682146367 1567% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 324.0 20.7667163134 1560% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 7.06120827912 1728% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133462858446 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133462858446 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783192776109 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224666668756 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 164.9 13.0946893788 1259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -257.38 50.2224549098 -512% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.7 11.3001002004 1148% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.14 8.58950901804 281% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.6 10.1190380762 1301% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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