In some countries, the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason, younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree?
In many countries in the world, retirement age differs. Some people claim that workers over 50 can't adapt well to rapid changing ideas in the modern workplace, for which younger staffs are preferred. Though there are still reasons for the old to work, I personally think employing the young would bring more benefits.
Firstly, young workers are more adaptive and enthusiastic in their job. Although older employee means more experienced one, young workers can come up with many innovative ideas, and can respond quickly to any changes. Second, hiring young workers are cheaper than keeping old ones. Furthermore, their productivity can easily surpass that of their predecessors. Lastly, not only the company will benefit from hiring new employees, but also the old ones. keeping the old in work after the average retirement age may cause depression and exhaustion. They might work for everyday life money instead of living on a pension and leading a peaceful post-retirement life.
All in all, young workers are more preferable when it comes to employing thanks to their advantages over the old. And by stop hiring old workers, not only the companies will be beneficial, but also the overage workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19487179487 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64418531429 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65641025641 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0029760323 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218403984971 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758937598302 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800990549417 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149913768227 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866549866772 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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