In some countries, disabled people face a lot of troubles to access public and private facilities.” What solutions do you have to help such people?
In this era we are used to seeing normal looking people. That is normal, because we hardly ever come across disabled individuals.
When we see people using a wheelchair we look surprised, with the shocking thoughts in our minds. If this mindset of ours keeps on going we will hurt the feelings of the disabled people. Because when you look dazed, it is very obvious to see that you look dazed. We should know that the handicapped human beings have feelings too. Even without these people that hurt their feelings, they still live a very difficult life. They can’t find jobs and earn money because they get rejected due to their disability which is very sad. They hardly find a seat in a bus, or other public transports because some people don’t give them their seat. They probably think that they ought to be isolated at home. They have a life too. They have their own affairs to do. So i do not get those people. The disabled people mostly get rejected from the public and private facilities in our country but, maybe in other countries it is different. I know this because, I have a cousin that is disabled and when he is in Astana we go out and hang out. We went to the cashier to go to the cinema and he said that we couldn’t go because, my cousin is disabled. I felt my cousin’s feelings so bad it hurt so hard. I personally experienced what is it like to be disabled. It is a depressing experience.
Saying this we should treat them like we do to a average looking person. They have feelings too and, are humans too. We should change our mindset correctly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith the shocking thoughts in our minds. If this mindset of ours keeps on going we ...
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ur minds. If this mindset of ours keeps on going we will hurt the feelings of the disabl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...some people don’t give them their seat. They probably think that they ought to be is...
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...that they ought to be isolated at home. They have a life too. They have their own af...
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...isolated at home. They have a life too. They have their own affairs to do. So i do n...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... They have their own affairs to do. So i do not get those people. The disabled p...
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Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...disabled and when he is in Astana we go out and hang out. We went to the cashier to...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...this we should treat them like we do to a average looking person. They have feeli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48263888889 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39590126715 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0620879173 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6818181818 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0909090909 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.31818181818 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164246278336 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498204512303 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575339249582 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835324283309 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734613373954 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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