In some countries a foreign language is taught at primary school do the advantages of learning a new language outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

In some countries, a foreign language is taught at
primary school.do the advantages of learning a new language outweigh the disadvantages?

The best age to learn a foreign language at primary school and in some countries taught the foreign language and for some merits and demerits of studying a different language Into the native language. in my opinion, some countries taught foreign language at the International School.
First of all, in some countries taught foreign language at the primary school and the more advantages to learning a foreign language numerous language learned for the knowledge improving and the person will have an understanding the culture and traditional moreover, easy to reading, writing, and speaking and not only the useful for Academic related but it also helpful while traveling some new place for example probably French and Arabic and English language is in high demand in some countries. for instance, acquaintances of spoken and written French will be greatly beneficial in navigating Montreal, western Switzerland, Monaco, and another place furthermore, there can be an enormous employment opportunity as well.
In addition to the foreign language taught at primary school for some benefit this period to learn grapsing the skills and improving the new ideas and forthrrmore interest to learning a new language and in also being the development for example nowadays some countries taught foreign languages such as an India some particular International school taught the English and Arabic some other specific language for useful the better life and achieve the goals moreover, mainly two benefits of the factors the first regarding the job purpose and second one academic for example, all of them know the native language but if they learn besides the foreign language to use the future job and business.
On the other hand, some drawbacks are the for foreign language is taught at primary school and in most of the case that knowledge would not be helpful and also the students have felt the burden and stress because of the hectic schedule more than ten subjects are the involved so does not time for the learned new foreign language and it is hard to understand.
In conclusion, in my opinion, some countries taught a foreign language at primary school because it is useful in future Life and another academic purpose and realistic for the job.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13896457766 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65470617972 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438692098093 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.191608879 49.4020404114 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.428571429 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.4285714286 20.7667163134 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5714285714 7.06120827912 405% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.556078419431 0.244688304435 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.358664389892 0.084324248473 425% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16207177666 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.403630804085 0.151304729494 267% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102617185163 0.056905535591 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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