It is been observed that authorities are in favor of embarkment of industries and business in regional areas. However, these movements have some disadvantages for business but that is outweighed by the long term advantages, in this essay we will discuss the same.
To begin with, there will be a huge impact on the profit of the production as the cost of supply and transportation will increase. In fact, it could be a disaster for the business persons as the regional places may not have enough resources in proximity, which could lead to further issues. Besides, this most of the workforce wants to work in cities because of all amenities and facilities, working far from home and families could increase the traveling time which could be the key of frustration in future. In a recent piece of news from a prominent newspaper "The Times", people feel more motivated near family and try to work deliberately. Consequently, this situation may be left the business people bankrupt.
On the other hand, the movement of big industries and business will be in favor of cities as it will show a positive impact on the limited resources of cities. Moreover, problems like industrial waste, polluted gases and traffic will be resolved. In fact, in an empirical survey by Oxford University, it is ascertained that around sixty-seven percent of greenhouse gases emerge from the industries in metro cities and this could have dwindled if these were established in far regions. Certainly, more employment opportunities will be there for the local people and this way regional development also is done as well.
To conclude, encouragement from the government could lay a few negative effects on the business profit but its long term advantages overshadows the downfall aspects for future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12969283276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94760435657 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5014934049 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184043153275 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711397473562 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519450190154 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128007995638 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578275112592 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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