In some countries, the governments encourage industries and business to move out from large cities to regional areas. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?c
It is true that these days, in some countries, authorities stimulate enterprises to move their factories and companies outside from metropolitan areas to deprived areas. While I accept that this has both pros and cons, I would argue that there are more demerits than merits.
On the one hand, there are important benefits for society when the head of executives relocate their offices and venues in areas outside cities centres. Firstly, firms would create a large number of jobs in rural areas, which leads to increasing total income in these areas. As the consequence, people living in the countryside don't need transfer from their hometown to big cities to find jobs, ergo, avoiding further overcrowding in centres. Secondly, companies could decrease their costs inasmuch as the costs are lower in remote zones. For instance, corporates pay less salary for blue-collar workers if they employ local people.
On the other hand, I believe that there are serious drawbacks, which outweigh these benefits. The principal reason for this view is that the availability of skilled workers is being diminished, given that most universities are in big cities and graduates tend to stay to seek employment in these cities. Furthermore, transportation difficulties are great obstacles for job-seekers to arrive in rural locations. Another reason is that companies based in regional areas are further away from their clients and other contacts, which have resulted in a sharp decline in sales figures. A good example of this is that the fast-food chains such as KFC and Lotteria in centres, which consume massive products in comparison to restaurants that are located in regional areas.
In conclusion, it seems to me that such large drawbacks that relocating industries and firms in regional zones, which outweigh the benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28620689655 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75405872792 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7064337737 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154010132413 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501630183714 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503374149513 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103381235346 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279039511827 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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