In some countries, mire and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from collage, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In this contemporary world people accept change according to the time period. Nowadays Youngsters are leaving their parents after competition of their studies or finding job, but some adults still living with your family. Living with the family and parents are more beneficial for youngsters and parents. According to my opinion, the brighter side of such plan overshadow its dark side.
To begin with, in some countries adults living with your family is the old tradition while countries like UK, USA etc. it is a shameful for adults. Firstly, if adults living with your parents they can get the financial and moral support of family. In any kind of situation the family members support him/her. Moreover, youngsters can get more time to spend with the family. Secondly, it is the money saving in all the way. As an example, if a person moves in any other place he/she has to pay the accommodation by their self, they also have to pay rent, bills and other expenses by their self, while they are living with the family all the expenses money they can save for the future plans and business.
What is more, in this competitive era, only that people can survive who has more self-confidence and who are independent. Youngsters who living alone they have skills like quick decision making, they are independent etc.On the other hand, adults who is staying with the with their parents or family they can shape their future plans and business by the support and experience of family members. Moreover, they can feel safe, secure and can away from the homesickness.
Put it in a nutshell, I have pen down saying that, adults who are staying with their parents have more positive impact and it has also some dark impact, but advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, kind of, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52166391275 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.126288581 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2585149759 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895266224562 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822128510559 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166971783355 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369589681509 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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