In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is thought that in many nations, shopping in local brands has been replaced by online ordering. From my point of view, in some situation this notion have both benefits and drawbacks appropriate with each person and each aspect of life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearance of modern teachnology that the requirement of individuals have increased gradually, so new innovation such as online store is greatly significant for the resident life. Not only does this phenomenon provide the best environment, valuable experience and high quality production for the citizens, which improve their mentality life, but also the propotion of unemployment and homeless people will be reduced since more occupations can be created such as client or transportation staff, which lead positive affection for the economic background of their country. Furthermore, the socioeconomic will be narrowed with the connection of internet equipment where all consumers have the same opportunity to approach with the helpfull production. To illustrate, there was a survey by Vimer Max, the famous interviewer and professor, who is an expert about the success of european nations where are find more like to access with online shopping. The statistics demonstrated that nearly every countries have got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the society development. The people will find dificulty distingushing the aurthentic production. If the custumer use the lower quality foods, they will suffer from some physical issues such as cardivascular disease. Moreover, some researchers noted that the region also correlate with a wide range of cognitive behaviers, including menory, self-monitoring and conscious self-awareness, so the local people will struggle to approach with the international production, various harmful influence will be led by this habit to the young generation.
To conclude, though my argument from the essay, this statement have its own strenth and weakness for the society, so the government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5191740413 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06216287653 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616519174041 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0797284667 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.923076923 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932852276806 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365867294385 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506128213312 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544334411609 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433422954197 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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