Nowadays, most people consider owning a home much more important than renting one. Moreover, it is believed that living in a self-owned home fives a feeling of stability, comfort and security. From my point of view, this statement depends on many factors to point out whether it is positive or negative situation.
In the one hand, people often claim that they owing a home do not have to worry about the land lor nor do they have to pay a monthly rent. Secondly, in some Asian nations, people tend to think that it is necessary for them to buy a house because it is considered that when they have a permanent home, they can pay attention to work to settle down their life. Another reasons, the home is like a heaven and so they spend quite as furniture on designing and decorating it, which also may make them feel motivative and satisfied or even relax when they comeback home. For instance, if someone wants to tie the knot, they will surely have a confidence in getting married as they have their own home.
On the other hand, home onwership is a negative trend as it forces unrealistic expectations because most of middle-class families buy a big house which is often out of their budget. Therefore, they find this by taking out huge loans and end up repaying the amount over a long time. Furthermore, this is also the reason why most of people are put under pressure and make them feel depletion which lead to negative situation.
In conclusion, I believe that owning a home can be a pleasure experience if done within a budget. However, it could turn into a negative one when a person getting loans to buy a home. Finally, it depends on purchaser’s circumstance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...urthermore, this is also the reason why most of people are put under pressure and make them fe...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62751677852 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59560667305 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8127511402 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234400760123 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812427419674 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595192895521 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134977693613 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349593152305 0.056905535591 61% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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