In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.why might this be the case do you think this is a positive or negative situation.
It is true that in some nations, individuals see buying a house as very essential rather than living in a rented one.this essay suggests what might be the reason and
also see the circumstance as a negative one.
There are two main sides to this development.the first is having a future heritage.Purchasing a house gives a family an ancestral background.for example,the late zik of Africa, a prominent democrats in Nigeria who bought a house for his children.the house is still a prominent place of relaxation,fostering togetherness and gathering of all kinds,giving all this he gave his children root to their origin.As well as this,it is very convenient and cost effective owning a home because it gives privacy and saves one from exhorbitant house maintenance bills and rents.
The situation is a negative one for two reasons. The main reason is that there will be more lands for housing rather than for agricultural purposes.for instance,lagos an urban city in western Nigeria,imports more food crops and essential vegetables from northern Nigeria,this is more likely to be because of the vast lands used to build houses instead of the planting of cash crops.Additionally,there might be dependent teenagers,they have parents who have homes and are accommodating, they do not see reasons to leave their comfort zones and hustle to feed themselves since their parent houses are very convenient for them thereby,making them rely on their parents for shelter and other good things of life.
In conclusion, the most likely case is humans trying out to be comfortable and getting a permanent ancestral place but the future dwindles,if we try owning properties like houses that means in such a country,famine might one day happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.229390681 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48835206008 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.628705932 49.4020404114 467% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.8 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276296530607 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159021225014 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482032046014 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14310104473 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453840453212 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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