In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some parts of the world, it is a fact that having home ownership is much better than living in a renting system. There are several reasons for such situations and also few visible influences too. Both aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the cases, the most common case for this is in some areas the cost of renting accommodation is too high so it would me more beneficial to invest money on buying a our own house rather than live in rent. For example, in country of Usa price of small renting accommodation is too high than other countries. In Additionally, some time renting quarters doesn't provide luxurious facilities such as personal car parking areas, swimming pool, gym and so on. Furthermore, the renting system doesn't provide a permanent home, and it is hard to arrange our luggage due to frequent change home
The mentioned causes have some positive impact too. The foremost positive effect is to provide stability and security. Home ownership offers a more permanent living situation. You have control over your home and can customize it to suit your needs and preferences. The biggest benefit is that it doesn't need to pan much more taxes. In many countries homeownership can deduct mortgage interest payments and property taxes from their annual income taxes. The valuation of home may increase after some years. So it is one type of long term Investment. Moreover, homeownership often fosters a sense of belonging within a community. It can provide opportunities for social interaction, neighborhood involvement, and forming lasting relationships with neighbors.
Thus, to conclude the topic, is this more beneficial to having our home rather than rent. Home ownership provides stability and it's a one type of long term investment and we become a part of that community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10033444816 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84678062181 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2656425456 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7222222222 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264371118424 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712441529415 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631753071404 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160351411416 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438597390191 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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