In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
In some countries, owning a home rather renting one is very significant for people.
Everyone lives peaceful in their own house, as satisfied. Owning a home has a lot of benefits and we can be different activities in there. Also we decorate how we want design and manners. People feel very capacious and safe such as protected. So nowadays many comfortable building and houses have been establishing for living. Everyone has been buying these to depending on their wishes. People made garden or pool and other entertaining zone in self-owned house, If they want to do this. On the one hand self-owned house will be inherited for generations.
We might be use rental house during travel time and although we go to another country for studying. Rental houses are divided into types depending on living conditions, as high price or low price. However these houses have more profit sides. If we do not have owning house another country, We will have to rent for during students cycle and other circumstances. These houses have profitables such as owning homes. Predominatingly We utilize flats for rent and temporary residence. So some countries taxed more money for rental house than owning home.
As far as I'm concerned, we need these two types of living place. We can see disadvantages and advantages sides, owing to all statements of houses. As well as the convenience and financial side, the houses what we want. In conclusion self-owned houses for permanent residence and rental houses for temporary residence and during travel time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07450980392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7674329479 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8400434981 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288085500216 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954665910128 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12819019824 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243685581337 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177472002961 0.056905535591 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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