In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a number of countries, people prefer to own a home instead of renting one. There might be various reasons behind their choice, such as high renting costs and more stability introduced by house ownership. In my opinion, this is a totally positive situation.
Firstly, some countries are very expensive to live. For instance, in Sweden living costs for a small family might exceed three quarters of the family's income. While food and other costs comprise half of the expenses, another half is spent on renting a home. Thus, many residents choose to buy a house and pay mortgage instead of a renting bill.
Secondly, owning a house brings stability in people's lives. When renting, there are risks of a sudden contract termination. For example, in the case of selling a house, often current renters should move out in a short notice period. In order to avoid such risks, people prefer to buy their own houses or flats.
In my opinion, a choice of owning rather than renting is a positive scenario. There are many benefits brought by this decision. Among the main advantages are a financial benefit of asset ownership and freedom of an owner to reconstruct and arrange it as he or she wants. Moreover, in the case of moving to different country, an owner can always let the house to someone else or sell it. Therefore, this decision does not introduce any restrictions, according to my knowledge.
To conclude, behind the preference to buy a house there are the certain comprehensive reasons, mentioned above. I think, that this choice is a good positive decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9063670412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65357853663 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5582995946 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7777777778 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261040702869 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07667945686 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559084136072 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132311972164 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420662856326 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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