IN SOME COUNTRIES,OWNING A HOME RATHER THAN RENTING ONE IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE.WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE?DO YOU THINK IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE SITUATION?
Having an opinion supposed that people ought to possess a house because it is important than renting an accommodation owning to flexibility and comfort. In my point, I think it has both advantages and disadvantages basing on situations.
It is apparent that having a home on your own makes an enormously private atmosphere and helps you feel more relax. On the one hand, you can freely decorate your home following hobbies such as formal, informal, modern, creative, aliens,... styles. Furthermore, paying a rental fee every month is not obligate anymore. Instead, we can use the monthly paycheck for other works relating to entertainment, investment, saving money,... And finally, considering the prospective time, when people grow up and have family, they need a stable life, a place where suitable for living in a long time.
But in some cases, when you do not have enough money to pay for a house, considering rental accommodation is quite reasonable. Despite the number of drawbacks, it has an affordable price. Moreover, it is the best solution for people who still do not want to build a house by themself. Per month, you have to pay a small fee for renting but in return, living in a narrow space or having an uncomfortable feeling is must be accepted. Additionally, you maybe have to stay with people you do not want and the others also live around you so you can not do emotional things.
In conclusion, actually, owning a house or tenting one base on your financial situation and purposes. In modern life, you should not buy a house when you do not have an amount of huge money because being in debt will bring extremely bad outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, as for, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82685512367 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82487121196 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.722955466 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243122606919 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785082655309 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464619321439 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145936354871 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305790294703 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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