In some countries owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In our generation, people think that it is more momentous to own a house instead of taking of lease it. From my point of view, this is a correct thought, because having your own home gives a person many opportunities in other areas of his life, except for finding a roof over his head.
Having his house even if the house is small, a person does not have to pay monthly or even weekly for his accomodation. He will just to pay for his utilities and other commodities. Also in his way it will be easier to achieve other life breakthroughs. And in the future, if a person himself wishes he can buy another house, which may turn out to be larger than before.
Another advantage of owning a home is that a person can do anything in his home, because not every landlord allows his client everything. For example, a landlord may not allows a client to keep pets in the house. And there is no guarantee that you may not be kicked out of the rented house.
Albeit, renting house also has its benefits for instance, if you temporarily go to another city or county for work or just on vacation, you can rent an apartment. You can have your own home in the country where you are going to live. And a rented one is also suitable for traveling.
But as mentioned at the commence, this is my personal opinion. For someone,this situation that many people think that owning a house is more important than a rented one may seem negative, but to me it seems, on the contrary, positive. In the end despite the fact that and own houses have some disadvantages, its positive aspects for exceed the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, except for, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45578231293 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53455000486 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9267085387 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312042391764 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103295080785 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065562035355 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175665763246 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996539312837 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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