In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Mini boutiques in some countries are not able to run on their business on the ground that people have tendency to travel by car to large shops in the other area. This means that those who do not own any transportations rarely have any chances to experience stores outside their town, which may leads to an ascending demand on them. From my perspective, the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, the rise of car use can bring some plus points. First, since people afford their own transportations, they will no longer deal with any difficulties in accessing any huge outlets in cities. As the result, out-of-town businesses may earn profound income due to this trend and have potential to expand more in the future. Second, a significant number of purchased cars may boost up the revenues of car industry, which keep this business area on a stable position among the others.
On the other hand, local shops receive little support from the dwellers and soon end up closing down because of low sales. This can threaten the town economy as well as increase the rate of unemployed people. Once the residents realize that their town will not be a suitable location to make a living, there would be a remarkable migration to big cities to find a job. Moreover, more people using transportations such as cars may result in remarkable gas emissions and carbon dioxide. Consequently, there would be higher number of people who suffer from diseases caused by polluted air, which harm their respiratory system.
In conclusion, there are some advantages using more cars to access to large business units apart from the town such as improving the income of cities’ stores and stabilizing car industry. However, this trend can bring up some disadvantages regarding high percentage of unemployment, air pollution and respiratory diseases.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99350649351 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78427595841 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1856895889 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353738758325 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107518383591 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784765318468 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20927891659 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337753336673 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.