With the fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are more and more people using fast food for their main meals. It’ll become common in every family in one day. Almost all people think the advantages of fast food outweigh the disadvantages. But for me, I think the drawback is more than positive in many different ways.
Firstly, I have to talk about the advantages of fast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing another work such as go shopping, look after the children…, and we don’t take too much time to make meals. In some ways, fast food is good for the living standard of families because we don’t need to cook meals; buy spices, gas, save electricity. We can reduce the costs of movement. In addition, if we use more fast food, we will make jobs for somebody, it’s a kind word. Some chiefs are becoming popular and getting respect. Consuming fast food help us be proactive in our life, become more independent.
On other hand, there’re so many disadvantages of fast food that we can’t negate. Fast food will make people who go out to eat fast food be lazier or be dependent on other people. Most fast food is too harmful as it has too much color, grease. Exist some bad guy who isn’t thoroughly processing food, if we eat that food we can take stomachache, indigestible or worth is death. Moreover, we will have heart disease, cancer, or be fat. If we always consume fast food, we can’t cook any things or show our skills of cooking to others.
Although fast food has many advantages that we can refuse. The disadvantages of fast food are over than the advantages. But we can consider the positives or negatives, that should we consume fast food continuously.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...k the drawback is more than positive in many different ways. Firstly, I have to talk about t...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing another work such as go...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r show our skills of cooking to others. Although fast food has many advantages that we c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, as to, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66216216216 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54990367769 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7716855077 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339446982379 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130355930656 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108461407877 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256494315816 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104715196012 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...k the drawback is more than positive in many different ways. Firstly, I have to talk about t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing another work such as go...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r show our skills of cooking to others. Although fast food has many advantages that we c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, as to, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66216216216 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54990367769 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7716855077 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339446982379 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130355930656 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108461407877 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256494315816 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104715196012 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.