With the fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern life, under the pressure of working, money, time and family, people tend to consider consuming fast food than home-cooked meal because of some advantages it brings. First and foremost, it is considered to be the best and convenient option for those who are not good at cooking or up to their ears and do not have enough time to eat as well as prepare their meal. People can use fast food whenever they want in a short time and it is sold everywhere and everywhen. For example, consuming fast food just takes my uncle from 10 to 15 minutes to buy and eat on the way to work place and he does not need to wash the utensils as eating home-cooked meal. On the contrary, if he chooses to eat home food, he has to prepare and buy the ingredients then cook it. It denfinitely takes him longer than fast food. In addition, the menu of junk food provides the varieties of ready meals and drinks which sounds delicious and attractive to diners. Therefore, human have more varieties of options to choose what they will eat quickly and do not need to think deeply about what they should eat in that day. Take my brother as an example, when he dined in the fast food restaurant, with the diversity kind of fast food in the menu, he could decide what he wanted to eat in the short time.
In the other hand, the case of health problems is increasing seriously from year to year because of the large amount of fast food consumed and some disadvantages of junk food brings to consumers. First and foremost, it is high in saturated fats and added sugar as well as high in calories, such as pizza, fried chicken, which leads buyers to the risk of health problems as obesities, heart pressure, diabetes and increasing blood pressure if they consume them constantly. Take my sister as an example, she was the person who ate fast food too much over a long period. Therfore, she not only gets overweight but also stomach ulcers and Azheimer as well. In addition, the comsumption of fast food may make human lives busier and drifts apart from their family since they do not have the oppoturnity to gather with their family members to have a meal together. Then, there is a long distance from them and their family members. For instance, in the fast paces of life, my friend, Mary fully drifts apart from her house as she usually consumes fast food and makes time for working than her family. Thus, she has no chances to share her strories with any person in her family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48106904232 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33783848083 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512249443207 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6960583051 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.352941176 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4117647059 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299083377391 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920674263927 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602347567781 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226369634495 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300060539303 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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