With the fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are more and more people using fast food for their main meals. It’ll become common in every family in one day. Almost all people think the advantages of fast food outweigh the disadvantages. But for me, I think the drawback is more than positive in many different ways.
Firstly, it is important to mention the advantages of fast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing another work such as go shopping, look after the children…, and we don’t take too much time to make meals. In some ways, fast food is good for the living standard of families because we don’t need to cook meals; buy spices, gas, save electricity. We can reduce the costs of movement. In addition, if we use more fast food, we will create jobs for somebody, leading to an increase in the employment rate. Some chiefs are becoming popular and getting respect. Consuming fast food help us be proactive in our life, become more independent.
On the other hand, there are also many disadvantages of fast food that we cannot negate. Firstly, fast food will make people who go out to eat fast food be lazier or be dependent on other people. Most fast food is too harmful as it contains too many calories and grease. Except for some bad guys who aren’t thoroughly processing food, if we eat that food we may suffer from stomachache, indigestible disorder or worst is death. Moreover, we will have heart disease, cancer, or be fat. If we always consume fast food, we can’t cook any things or show our skills of cooking to others.
Although fast food has many advantages that we cannot refuse. The disadvantages of fast food are over than advantages. But we can consider the positives or negative, that should we consume fast food continuously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r show our skills of cooking to others. Although fast food has many advantages that we c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, except for, i think, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73202614379 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56209983992 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6011560501 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347320882564 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131365847209 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108036197317 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260621778241 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101513552461 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.