In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In this day and age, people have the tendency to go to out-of-town shopping centers; therefore, many small town-center shops are on the verge of bankruptcy. This leads to a list of foreseeable consequences, including the growth in automobile usage. Although this modification can have several drawbacks, I believe that the merits outrank the shortcomings.
On the one hand, there are some negative aspects of large out-of-town stores. Firstly, it is a matter of the country's economy. If people keep choosing large businesses over the smaller ones, these shops may be threatened with shutdown. As a result, it is inevitable that a huge number of employees might face losing their jobs. Furthermore, people who do not own a private car could not access large malls easily, which lead to limited shopping preferences.
On the other hand, we have to consider how beneficial this trend could be. To commence with, since these big stores are located on the outskirts, they would not have to pay much for the rental fee. Consequently, the tradesmen are able to sell the same product at a lower price to their customers than the small downtown shops. Another reason is that large shopping centers would undoubtedly provide a wider variety of goods. Thus, buyers could purchase diverse items at once. For this reason, air pollution will be decreased significantly due to the reduce in citizens' transportation. Last but not least, getting out of town is definitely a good idea for those who want to escape from their harsh reality. They can enjoy this shopping time as a peaceful weekend getaway.
To summarize with the arguments given above, I firmly think that the upsides of larger stores located far away from the central city overweigh its downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06551724138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77113755151 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5242533094 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298623226547 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736546083084 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866816921833 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162120013642 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106061477009 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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