Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. Why is the reason for doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
From this day and age, children have been undergoing heavy pressure from their own parents. There are many explanations for parents’ coercion which can be seen clearly in our society. From my perspective, this trend is negative due to the drawback brought to the victims.
In total, there are two main reasons that lead to children’s mental burden. First, parents often highly expect their children to achieve difficult targets and have a glorious life without any concerns. It means that the offspring would have to take a huge effort to study and practice hard for high grades at school in order to satisfy their parents’ desire. For Instance, they have to enrich their knowledge for 12 hours a day in all weeks by taking part in different extra classes including night shifts. The other reason is that parents are afraid their children would make mistakes as they did in the past. As the result, they push their children over limitations so as not to do the same.
In consequence, children may suffer from severe effects caused by the pressure from parents. One negative impact is that children may lose the ability to make their decisions by the fact that their parents always be the ones who control everything. In other words, it is hard for children to live independently and fulfill their ambitions as they have to follow in their mother’s or father’s footsteps. Moreover, children may easily deal with a lot of failures while completing tasks on the ground that parents’ expectations are out of their reach. This can result in more depression and disappointments, which may cause the children to hurt themselves terribly, or even suicide if they are unable to handle the pressure anymore.
To conclude, the reasons why parents put heavy pressure on their offspring are high expectations and fear of children’s mistakes. This is a negative development for the children regarding indecision and less motivation in life.
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Suggestion:
...indecision and less motivation in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04968944099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72889313827 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3996045501 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468051457104 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155185705027 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656603748259 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313498773534 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972371529389 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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