Discuss the pros and cons of using public transport
Nowadays, the number of people using public transport rises sharply as they want to reduce air pollution. There are many other benefits; however, mass transportation still has some drawbacks. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of public transportation are examined.
The most important advantage is that taking public transport reduces pollution and improves our environment. In big cities, especially in the US or China, air pollution is a serious problem since large numbers of motorbikes and cars are used. Thus, by using public transport, the air pollution issues can be lessened quite effectively. Moreover, it is shown that public transport is much eco-friendlier than cars. What I mean is that taking mass transportation can reduce gas emissions and slow down global warming.
Secondly, public transport is much cheaper for every individual compared to owning a private car. You can save money in fuels, repairs, washing and so on if you use public transport. It is also a good choice for who can’t drive. This can be due to the fact that they don’t have driver’s licenses or have bad vision.
Despite these aforementioned benefits, several negative aspects do exist. It may be terrible with some employees because they have to wait for such a long time, especially in rush hours, until the next bus or train arrive and they can be late for work. An additional disadvantage would be a higher chance for infections with diseases. If you are unlucky, you might catch a flu or other diseases on your way to work or back home if you use public transport systems as it is often crowded.
In conclusion, it is worth considering that there are both pros and cons of using public transport. The benefits include air pollution reduction, better environment, and cost saving,… and the drawbacks would emerge consequently in terms of long waiting times, and higher chance for infections with diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89005732519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4449662778 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31961398212 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114580586914 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129882963844 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191470914785 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678370759695 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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