In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Nowadays, with the improvement of quality of life, the number of shops are increase dramatically. But people now tend to buy things at out of town stores more than at the small town-center shops. That make the number of people using cars increase highly. In my opinion, the drawbacks are outweigh the advantage of this situation.
On the one hand, the large number of people buying things at the large store can redouble the turnover in economics. the more car they buy, the more tax the government receives. The number of out-of-town stores increase highly can make the economy of that area also increase. The land will cost more and they need more employee to satisfied the large number of customers and it also help decrease the problem unemployment. Increase cars also help the problem traffic jam in the town center lower.
On the other hand, the more people using car, the more polluted the air will be. People tend to buy things at out-of-town shop also can increase the problem traffic jam in that area. Almost people who living in the town center also change their house for more convenient and it will make population disorder. The last disadvantage is the store in the small town can’t have enough interest so they can’t afford the money of house’s rent, workers’ salary and can’t exist anymore.
In conclusion, the tendency of going shopping in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages but the largest drawback is it can disorganize the economic situation of different area
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...y. But people now tend to buy things at out of town stores more than at the small town-cent...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ighly. In my opinion, the drawbacks are outweigh the advantage of this situation. On th...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...can redouble the turnover in economics. the more car they buy, the more tax the gov...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...e large number of customers and it also help decrease the problem unemployment. Incr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5588768682 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6951059501 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30933802736 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120309087102 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890781902728 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198497333813 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101475648056 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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