In some countries university student live away from home and in another cities while studying. do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another city.
In this present era, all student want to study more. Many university students stay away from their family and hometown during the study. This essay will explain both aspects of this phenomena and also discussed which side is dominant the most. All the explanation are in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with there are plenty of drawbacks of living away from home. First and foremost, if pupils went to other cities for learning, then they have to make food by themselves or buys from the outside, which is not good for their healths. Furthermore, living alone required multitasking skill, students have to do study and other housework, which consume the valuable time of students, and they cannot focus accurately on the study. For example, 70% of students who stay in hostels were a low result, which was written in one survey of the Times of India.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of benefits to living alone. Firstly, if pupils live in other cities, then they become more independent. They can make decisions by themselves, which is the main plus-point of them. Secondly, those who live in hostels or PG, they have better multitasking skills, because they do more than one work at the same time. For instance, students do study as well as other work, which is related to living such as making food.
To conclude, although hostel life is beneficial, it has more disadvantages than advantages. Students are suffering from health problems and less result because of living alone. In my words, the drawbacks outweigh the merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...This essay will explain both aspects of this phenomena and also discussed which side...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94636015326 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54417670421 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1333714009 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225311543247 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760106796351 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595407939314 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132902156189 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271037769693 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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