Due to globalization, many students prefer working or living in other countries. Learning foreign language has numerous advantages over student who are monolingual. So definitely learning foreign language is beneficial. This has certainly steered debates as when this needs to be introduced in school. Many people are of the opinion that foreign language needs to be taught in secondary school. However, I am of the opinion that foreign language should be introduced in primary school as the children can get sufficient time to gain control over the language.
Student who are bilingual have numerous advantage over their peer who are monolingual. This creates more job opportunities for bilingual student. Companies do recruit people who know foreign languages as this is beneficial for the company itself. There are examples where a person having Chinese as a foreign subject in school was recruited by a renowned Chinese school to teach English to their children. That person being bilingual could very easily relate English words with Chinese. This helped the children to learn faster.
Learning foreign language in primary school has its own advantages. Firstly, Children at such a tender age can very easily grasp information. This becomes very easy for them to learn new language. Secondly, children will have sufficient time till they graduate to become fluent in that language. The disadvantages are they being adolescence they will be heavily burden with an additional subject. They may also get confused with words and may end up mixing both the languages. Also many do not get to decide the subject of their choice.
However learning foreign language in secondary has advantage because students are comparatively matured enough to decide the language of their choice. They are also easily can relate to words which make them learn the language quicker as compared to primary children. The disadvantage is they have limited period to gain fluency of the language.
So to conclude, learning foreign language is definitely advantageous and it will be best if this is being introduced at an early age especially in primary school. Though there are disadvantages in learning the foreign language at such an early stage of life, the advantages overweigh them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: than
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Suggestion:
...of life, the advantages overweigh them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76827641914 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465373961219 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9419160894 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9583333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0416666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363179270752 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115086647013 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808659211221 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228524626747 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468696257133 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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