Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In some aspect, there is a growing sentiment today that making plans for the future can greatly affect the present. Although it is significant to have some general future goals, individuals should ought to prioritise right now. In this essay, I will discuss my stand providing relevant evidences.
Indeed,it is undeniable that planning future has some benefits for people. To be specific, a detailed plan enables people to anticipate upcoming barriers they have to overcome and requirement they have to fulfill. Thus, it provides people with sufficient time to get well-prepared to avoid unexpected results as well as seizing potential opportunities and gain their longing and desires. Besides, a master plan plays a vital role as a map and guidance in the long run towards the final goals in order that people do not get distracted and lost during the process.Basically,it is naturally following that planners is always oriented and his or her efforts will surely pay off.
On the flip side, there is a great deal of researches which demonstrate that challenges we may encounter in the future is a source of anxiety.In the first place, when people make a plan , most of them often expect a perfect result even out of their reach and force themselves to have overworked. For instance, students at high school in Viet Nam in recent research almost spend 8 to 12 hours in a day to study and the purpose of this phenomenon is passing the entrance examination at top universities. Therefore, they often feel under pressure and hardly keep themselves contented and delighted. Moreover, life is unpredictable since issues may arise out of people's control, which means carefully-outlined plans could end up in trash bin. Hence, the philosophy of focusing on the present is of great importance in people to have flexible improvisation and avoid being passive.
To sum up, all things have taken into account ,both planning the future and focusing on present have their own advantages but in my opinion, the benefits of focusing on present blatantly outweigh than dealing more on future. However, it is highly recommended that each person should consider carefully to choose a method which is possible for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07713498623 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9344401848 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6465200502 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.642857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219639237721 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734896300331 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067018626767 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133801273553 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300934046384 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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