Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In the fast living world, people are trying to do more work in a same amount of time in the past. Every mistakes will waste their valuable time so plan and schedule are designed to show how the route would be. People start to plan anything before they do their task to achieve the goal. However, others think that planning for the future is unprofitable and the only matter they need to focus is the present. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with this statement due to many benefits that blueprinting process will bring out to people.
Firstly, planning future create the motivation for people to help them go farther in their lifetime. In other words, clear goals show us which step need to be done in order to receive the thing people want. A plan can help us organize the resources such as time, money, strength and employers to prepare for the challenges they need to face off. It help people solve the problem with less risky and help people know how to escape and start a new direction. Secondly, a scheme support people in saving resources such as money, time, strength and employers. People can complete their work with more acquisition because the planning help them paying less resources. Which mean, more money and time can be saved up for the next investment or lower the damage of economic crisis. For instance, in 2020, a pandemic called Covid-19 damaged the world finance. Many companies included large companies were in bankrupt due to many reason, one of that is they not has the extended plan for that situation. Last but not least, people not living in an ideal world so every successes people earn need the clear point of view. Designing schedule is one of the tools to help people to become successful.
On the other hand, the arranging alone will not useful anymore. The idea without the action from people will always be an idea and nothing be done. The requirement of focus on the preset is important and start to do their work instead just drawing the future. Moreover, sometimes, people have changed their mind during the job meaning all the plan that they have done now is wasted.
In conclusion, although there are some negative perspectives from planning for future, the benefits of arrangement bring us is no doubt. Have a bright plan and work hard to do that plan will be the key to be a successful person.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...he challenges they need to face off. It help people solve the problem with less risk...
^^^^
Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to pay' or 'pay'.
Suggestion: to pay; pay
...uisition because the planning help them paying less resources. Which mean, more money ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 917, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...large companies were in bankrupt due to many reason, one of that is they not has the extend...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 954, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...to many reason, one of that is they not has the extended plan for that situation. L...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66987951807 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34512431884 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513253012048 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6115690628 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305881731804 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885406576141 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590396644421 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185991726959 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766832842134 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...he challenges they need to face off. It help people solve the problem with less risk...
^^^^
Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to pay' or 'pay'.
Suggestion: to pay; pay
...uisition because the planning help them paying less resources. Which mean, more money ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 917, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...large companies were in bankrupt due to many reason, one of that is they not has the extend...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 954, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...to many reason, one of that is they not has the extended plan for that situation. L...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66987951807 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34512431884 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513253012048 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6115690628 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305881731804 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885406576141 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590396644421 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185991726959 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766832842134 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.