Some peaople think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that children after 7 years of age should begin their formal education. The other think they should begin at a very early age. I completely agree that formal education for children start after 7 years of age. Because it has more merit rather than demerit for some reason.
In the one hand, the main benefit of begining study after age 7 is to make the kids understand the subjec and what they are doing, also have a good mentality to know each other, it is because after age 7 they have learn more from their family about what children can do and can not to do. for example my son when he was 5 he can not control what his doing, he always fight with his friend and also asking and even taking his friend toys and when he turn 7 he can understand what i'm saying and also curious about something, such as why bicycle not fall down when we ride it. As result to start formal education after age 7 is more effective and more prepared than at a very early age.
However, there are some drawbacks of children should begin their formal education at very early age, firsly they still careless about their activity and what they are doing, for example if they study in early age they do not care about their study, they just think about what they want to do, such as playing with their freind, drawing picture, and buy some snack. It is important that children should begin formal education after age 7.
To sum up, from where I stand, I believe that, formal education for children should begin after 7 years of age, to be better on their study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...er, it is because after age 7 they have learn more from their family about what child...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fights'.
Suggestion: fights
...n not control what his doing, he always fight with his friend and also asking and eve...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'turns'.
Suggestion: turns
...even taking his friend toys and when he turn 7 he can understand what im saying and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39310344828 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05402652619 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.850822899 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.4 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474306934427 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282055992253 0.084324248473 334% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178470273609 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366045315899 0.151304729494 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149751158248 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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