Some people agrue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others belive that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people claim that in these days there are some bad situation among people with a view to choose jobs, such as an dissatisfactory job and low-paid of job while other people opine that it is better to try as well as ameliorate in these types of situations.
In this essey, I intend to shed light on both notions and give my point of view.
It is true that nowadays some people encounter any problems in order to find work. As a rusalt, they must choose unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. For example outside cleaners, garbagers and the same of professions. In fact, these types of jobs defray low salary in their workers. No matter how hard such professions, they must work in order to feed in their family, even if their salaries are not enough. That is why the government should imrove their wage-range.
On the other hand, working hard to overpower such conditions can help to advance in profession career as well as to lead a successfull life. In fact, there are many examples throughtout history about people who became successful by concuering difficult circumstances. Take an example, Cristiano Ranaldo was born to a financialy backward family and had no money recieve training for football or join a club. However, he took many parttime jobs later on his teenage years and worked hard. Finanly, during their life as well as he was selected to the Partugal national football team.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the government should create a variaty wide of opportunities for poorly-paid jobs and imrove their salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87452471483 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75529270178 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7748632169 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244303859755 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656918614088 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812334679601 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126991273739 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989786351893 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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