Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing?
Discuss your opinion.
With the emerge of new technologies, people are more willing to purchase new gadgets. This seems to be a mixed blessing.
There is no doubt that excessively buying new devices can cause people some problems. Firstly, it will result in a budget deficit, making it harder for buyers to pay their rents and monthly expenses, in that new products tend to be expensive and without a planned saving, buyers might end up without money for essential expenses like phone bills and flat rents. Secondly, most of these devices create an ecosystem for the user that make him buy more products from the manufacturer and create new needs for them. As an example, new mobile phones require new type of charger cable that the user needs to purchase, this can result in more spending as well.
Financially not beneficial as it can be, having up-to-date devices have many merits. By buying cutting-edge devices, one can catch up with the latest technology and enjoy new inventions. Hardly can a new product has less benefits compare with its older version. Other than this, provided one update his device regularly, he can sell his older gadget for a good price and the sacrificial value of his device becomes low, because as a new product arrives in the market, price of the old version one tend to decrease. Finally, new devices work more smoothly and can be efficient to work with, so in the long run the upgrading expense would pay off.
In conclusion, buying latest products excessively can cause budget problems, this, however, can be better for us in the long term, because new is alway better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
With the emerge of new technologies, people are more wi...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun benefits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nventions. Hardly can a new product has less benefits compare with its older version...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buying the latest'.
Suggestion: buying the latest
...ense would pay off. In conclusion, buying latest products excessively can cause budget p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4874033573 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6684364659 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15859821421 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743470914012 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055710854662 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118967972517 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449931033569 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.