Some people argue that governments should spend money only on medicines and education and that the things like threatres and sports stadiums are luxurious.Agree and disagree?

Essay topics: Some people argue that governments should spend money only on medicines and education and that the things like threatres and sports stadiums are luxurious.Agree and disagree?

Hundal's picture

In the sophisticated era, education play a vital role in our human life.I thing education and medicines should be payment for goverment. In piont to veiw, theatres and sports stadiums are indispenable in our life and also basic need in life.I fully agree this statement.There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my point to view in upcoming paragraph.

Modern world is the modern of technology and information. Nowsdays, education play an essential role in their life . They are umpteen well co- education in the communication.Afterthat, all schools provide smart class in their primary andstudents can be learn new language.For instance, spanish, french, german, japan and brazil etc. I think, today are very touch competition one to onther.Moreover, student are participate all the module like outdoor games, action,reality show and art so on. Otherwise, adolescent are very curious about learn new things.

Nevertheless,sports stadiums and theatres play an important role in human life.Furthermore, in my opinion,dwellers are play physical games like football, tennis, cricket and hockey so on. Some people believe that it is very affect human being life.Then, they are reduce the diseases.For instance, hypertension, cardiac,obesity,axiety and depression etc. Last but not the least, all age group play more physical games in their life. They can be always health and fit. Therefore, entertainment source play indispenable in their life and dwellers life is very hectic schedule in our life because it is watch the television are basic need.It is luxurious of mind and it is easily focus on module.

In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in my point to view, all module is very essential in their life.I thing goverment should payment equal in fulfill needs in all module because it is necessary all the activities in our life.

Votes: 
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
More essays by this user:

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ion play a vital role in our human life.I thing education and medicines should be...
^
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...n play a vital role in our human life.I thing education and medicines should be paym...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thing education and medicines should be payment for goverment. In piont to veiw,...
^^
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...hing education and medicines should be payment for goverment. In piont to veiw, theatr...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...in our life and also basic need in life.I fully agree this statement.There are pl...
^
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ed in life.I fully agree this statement.There are plethora reason behind it. I will d...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion play an essential role in their life . They are umpteen well co- education in...
^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n their life . They are umpteen well co- education in the communication.Afterthat...
^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Afterthat
...ell co- education in the communication.Afterthat, all schools provide smart class in the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y andstudents can be learn new language.For instance, spanish, french, german, japa...
^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...re very touch competition one to onther.Moreover, student are participate all the module...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'participated'.
Suggestion: participated
...ion one to onther.Moreover, student are participate all the module like outdoor games, acti...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reality
...ll the module like outdoor games, action,reality show and art so on. Otherwise, adolesce...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...about learn new things. Nevertheless,sports stadiums and theatres play an important...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...es play an important role in human life.Furthermore, in my opinion,dwellers are play physic...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dwellers
...in human life.Furthermore, in my opinion,dwellers are play physical games like football, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...that it is very affect human being life.Then, they are reduce the diseases.For insta...
^^^^
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... affect human being life.Then, they are reduce the diseases.For instance, hypertension...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...life.Then, they are reduce the diseases.For instance, hypertension, cardiac,obesity...
^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , obesity
...ases.For instance, hypertension, cardiac,obesity,axiety and depression etc. Last but not...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hysical games in their life. They can be always health and fit. Therefore, entert...
^^
Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... is watch the television are basic need.It is luxurious of mind and it is easily...
^^
Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atch the television are basic need.It is luxurious of mind and it is easily focu...
^^
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...levision are basic need.It is luxurious of mind and it is easily focus on module...
^^
Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...is luxurious of mind and it is easily focus on module. In summarise, after analy...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that issue reckon, in my point to view, all module is very essential in their li...
^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... module is very essential in their life.I thing goverment should payment equal in...
^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...odule is very essential in their life.I thing goverment should payment equal in fulfi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37328767123 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42202893132 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.838297195 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10567415687 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03622421491 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443386860381 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713278736452 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458315375441 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Pages