Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The trade-off between job satisfaction and high income has always been a confusing topic that everyone has to consider when it comes to career orientation. While many people claim that a passionate job should come first, others reject this notion, believing that a well-paid one ensures a stable life. Presented below are several factors accounting for the stark contrast between these two perspectives.
On the one hand, an enjoyable job offers citizens a number of benefits. Firstly, if people can pursue their dream occupation, they will have inspiration and motivation to devote themselves to the jobs. It is true that a person cannot climb the career ladder without personal enjoyment for his or her job. No doubt job satisfaction is a great source of strength which helps people overcome difficulties they may encounter at the workplace. Secondly, people tend to regret their early decisions, one of which is wrong career. Numerous white-collar workers find themselves stuck with boring daily tasks in the offices and wish to have a change. Nevertheless, sometimes it is too late for them to seek for a desired job as they lack appropriate qualifications as well related experience.
On the other hand, some would contend that a good salary should be prioritized for certain reasons. One of the most obvious reasons is that money is indispensable, especially during the period of economic crises like today. Apparently, a staggering number of people have become unwaged and homeless recently. Besides, in order to raise the kid better, there must be at least one breadwinner in the family; therefore, a high paying job should be taken into consideration.
Furthermore, many particular occupations require special talents that not everyone has. For instance, an opera singer must have a great vocal to hit high notes, not to mention the ability to convey the emotions to the audience. Hence, this artistic job may not be suitable for ordinary people even though they have a passion for it.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it is the best to have a job which is well paid and enjoyable at the same time; however, it depends heavily on individuals to choose one over another.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09749303621 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85098547638 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615598885794 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4991629929 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0555555556 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173750739032 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518659784074 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313551320369 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092924966513 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164490865583 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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