There is little doubt that having a satisfying job is the aspiration of every individual in the society when entering into the employment market. While certain people believe that job satisfaction is more important than earning great amount of income, others opposed and suggest that having good salaries is more essential. From my perspective, I opine both sides should be equally valued as the benefits of both are pivotal for everyone.
Many people who tend to engage in the work which provides content salaries. This is often due to the fact that money is fundamental to daily lives. Besides craving for higher personal reputation and achievements, it is nearly impossible for people to fulfill any desire without the assistance of money. For instance, as the escalating price, people are overwhelmed by the heavy burden of meeting one’s basic demands, such as meals, clothes, transportation and so on. As a result, earning enough salaries is of vitally importance for every individual in the community.
Apart from the opinion above, others may argue that choosing a job that interests oneself is more necessary. This is probably true due to the fact that people often perform exceptionally and having successful outcome with great passion. One salient example of this can be seen in the scientists. Most scientists commit themselves into scientific research rather than engaging in the profession like doctors or professor. Scientists participate in clinic trials in order to analyze and discover the advanced medication which could address the problem of human health.
By way of conclusion, I utterly convinced that it is imperative to stress on both sides by virtue of the benefits it brings for the society and individual.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2688172043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83074713242 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.835864489 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208410431127 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618961707387 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710468229999 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111321936733 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737197646938 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.