Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
While many people say that job satisfaction play more an important role in workplace than job security, there are those who claim that permanent job is a greater significance. Although job security influences on workers, I believe that sense of enjoyment in career is also a highly essential factor.
On the one hand, some workers believe a permanent job is more necessary and essential because of the stability and credibility it brings. In terms of finance, workers in a permanent job know exact their monthly income, and thus they are full of control their financial plan. As the consequences, workers have no longer faced to financial issue such as debts and living costs, then thay can bring into focus the importance of other factors in life such as career path. Additionally, staying loyal in one job as a result in highly credibility, as many workers view moving up the career ladder and prioritizing job security as indicator as organizational commitment. Hence, gaining the trust of employees enhance most of promotion prospects and additional perks, also they can easily get bonuses or become a shareholder.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why job satisfaction is believed to be more essential than job security. Firstly, sense of enjoyment make an outstanding contribution to not only stimulating worker’s work productivity, but also enhancing their working spirit. To take Google company as a particular example, it is not only having a spectacular and suitable salary, but also providing many creational places in working environment such as gym, climbing walls, video gambling machines and rest areas, which leads to the fulfillment of employees. Once satisfied is fulfilled, employees are less likely to suffer from work stress or burnout, leading to enhancing working productivity and employment morale. Last but not least, keeping their employees gratified is also an effective way to reduce turnover rate. For example, worker, who is fulfilled their enjoyment, is less likely to seeking another jobs and making companies are more easier to recruit and retain talented employees.
In conclusion, while many people think that job security plays a key factor in career because of financial stability and work credibility, I believe that job satisfaction is more outweigh than it, as satisfied workers are more likely to be work productive and reduce the rate of unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26098191214 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93981452894 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1422709014 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356996558395 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125115933335 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136301047398 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21178442271 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138450980569 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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