Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society Discuss both views and give your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in particular, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4262.0 1615.20841683 264% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.84295612009 5.12529762239 192% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.44589653617 2.80592935109 265% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459584295612 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1155.6 506.74238477 228% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.60771543086 168% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.976342443 49.4020404114 409% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.705882353 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0587013096102 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554994180569 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585239923459 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441612514035 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435341880474 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.0946893788 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -46.96 50.2224549098 -94% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.0 11.3001002004 230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 40.09 12.4159519038 323% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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