Some people believe that all company decision should be taken by managers, whereas, other think it is better to include employees while decision making? discuss both points and give your opinion.
It is considered by few of individuals that all decision of a company should be taken by only employers, while, other masses concern that employees should also take part in decision making. According to my opinion decision taken in the presence of employees is beneficial for company as compared to decision taken by only managers. I will discuss both perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, some people think that the presence of both employers and employees is better while decision making, I also agree. Firstly, it increases the cooperation between managers and workers. To be more precise, if all the decisions are taken in the presence of workers, then they think that they are important members of the company and they start following all the instructions of their managers, similarly, employers think that employees are also concerning about the works of a company. Thus, the presence of workers in the decision-making increase the cooperation among members of the companies. Secondly, the development of the company can boost. To elaborate, if employers start including workers in decision making, then employees think that the work of the company is their own work and they start working efficiently. Resultantly, the growth of the company start increasing.
In contrast, why some people believe that only managers should take decisions. The predominant reason behind it is that it delay the implementation of decisions. In other words, more number of mass in decision making means different point of views , that's why it is difficult to choose the right perspective.
Hence,the decisions are not taken at their correct time.
To conclude, although the presence of workers in decision-making delayed the decisions, but, I think it's benefits like inclinement in corporation and growth of company have more significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, while, i think, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33447098976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00440272673 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484641638225 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6567808871 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465563000119 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138737545311 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933914875464 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223479501555 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10719314991 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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