Some people opine that children should not be let to decide on their everyday matters by themselves because it will make them to be self-centered. However, others argue that children should be permitted to make decision by themselves. I completely agree with the latter view that children should be allowed to choose their own decision on everyday matters.
On the one hand, children should not be allowed to make their own choices because they will have tendency to only choosing thing that is beneficial for them. This is because, children are often still too immature to be considerate with other people. Hence, it is better to leave those choices on their parents' hands. For example, Matt is 7 years old and he is always asked to choose his own decision without his parents' supervision. As a result, Matt often chooses something that is only beneficial for him without considering the impact on others' life. Matt then grows up to be self-centered and spoiled person. However, it is still possible for children to decide by themselves if they are still being guided by their parents in deciding the wisest choice on their everyday matters.
On the other hand, children should be permitted to decide by themselves because it will have significant effect to their personal growth. Children who are taught to make their own decisions since their early age will most likely to grow as independent person. This is because they have been trained to choose their own decisions without relying on others' opinion. After being used to decide with small matters, they will be used to make a decision in a bigger problems that they will face as they grow up. As long as they are still being guided when choosing their own decisions, negative impacts such as tendency to be spoiled people will not occur will not happen on them. For instance, Nic is 7-year-old kid, and he is being taught by their parents to decide his everyday matters by himself. Before deciding, his parents have already told him about what is good and what is not good to do, thus Nic has a guide in deciding on his everyday matters. As a result, Nic successfully grows up as an independent person.
In conclusion, letting children to decide by themselves on their everyday matters can cause children to be self-centered because children will have tendency to only picking choice that is beneficial for them due to their lack of immaturity and consideration. However, it is still possible for children to decide by themselves if they are under their parents' supervision, which will cause children to grow up as independent person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... their own decisions without relying on others opinion. After being used to decide wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90249433107 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62191732525 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.383219954649 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4229842701 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253537324265 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101655550098 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064762559318 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19159691443 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239220649634 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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