Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matter that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It has always been a hot issue whether or not children should be given the freedom of decision on daily activities. While some people condemn this idea as they believe it will consequently lead to a society where people only care about themselves, others find it essential to allow children opportunities of deciding on what is prominent to them. On this essay, I will expound both views providing relevant examples.
On the one hand, it is possible that children will become self-indulgent when parents allow them to decide on regular purchasing. First, children will lose the sense of responsibility as a member of society. For instance, majority of the children will spend their entire time on video games if they are given the green light which will ultimately make them care less about what’s going on with the world and their responsibilities as a moral citizen. However, it is necessary to look at both sides of the argument.
On the other hand, the multi-folded benefits of allowing children to decide for themselves cannot be ignored. Children will soon turn into adults and adults everywhere have to decide on plenty of things on a day to day basis. Permitting children to decide on everyday matters will develop their decision-making skills. For instance, children when they are allowed to select a video game from myriads of options available, they have to choose one that they will enjoy the most. In addition, children will learn about the consequences of their actions. That is whatever decision they make will have a chain of cause and effect that will determine their future. For example, if parents allow children to have a haircut of their choice, children will have to deal with the same hair cuts for months and that includes the praise or mockery that comes along with it.
To sum up, it is always a tough decision for parents to either allow children to decide for themselves or not as each side has its own series of advantages and disadvantages. If I were to given an opinion, I would incline towards allowing children rights of choice as children learn valuable life lessons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
It has always been a hot issue whether or not children should be given the freedom of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92737430168 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71895486964 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522346368715 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0704094773 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210231809171 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744406602598 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637733224077 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132517882675 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315592104802 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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