Some people opine that children letting children to decide by themselves on everyday matters will cause them to be selfish, while others believe that it will create positive impact to their life. I completely agree with the latter view and will explain the reasons.
On the one side, children still do not have enough awareness to behave properly in the society. As a result, letting children to decide by themselves may cause them to make a choice that is only beneficial for them. If the behavior continues, children will grow up as self-centered and spoiled people. For example, Anthony has always been let by their parents to choose everything by himself. Because he has been used to chose everything by himself, he is not used to think about others' opinion and needs. As a result, Anthony grows up as selfish person who does not care about others' views. However, if this problem can be minimized if they are allowed to make a decision under parents' supervision.
On the other side, permitting children to decide by themselves will turn them into independent people. If they are used to make decisions since their early age, they will not find difficulties in making bigger decisions when they turn into adults. As long as their parents guide and supervise them about the choices that they make, children will not turn into self-centered people. For instance, Anthony has always been asked by his parents to decide by himself about his daily matters. But before Anthony made his own decision, his parents always tell him about which thing is good and bad, and which thing is allowed to be done and to not be done. Consequently, Anthony successfully grows up as independent person who can decide by himself even about more complex matter.
In conclusion, even though letting children to decide by themselves may cause them to make a choice that is only beneficial for them, this thing can be prevented by supervising them. I completely agree with the latter view because if done under correct parents supervision, permitting children to decide by themselves will turn them into independent people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to making'.
Suggestion: used to making
...em into independent people. If they are used to make decisions since their early age, they w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97740112994 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58968531751 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443502824859 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.132206301 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202243907456 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678649983106 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543552747314 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13456831978 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497493893286 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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