In society, most of the people doing business to improve their wealth with key strategies. Someone expresses that doing business with include family members causes some problems, Might be they are True. In my opinion, Run a business with the family to have some benefits and problems also. I will explain in brief.
One Hand, If any want to develop their business some Rules, Regulations and Structure are important. The family treats businesses like their opportunity so they will try hard and when chances are coming, they will grab it and improves the business into the competitor world. If any delay or interruption has occurred they freely communicate with each other and they will find out the solution to that problem. In my view the family within the business is really great environment and which was really helpful to find out the key factors to improve their business sales.
Otherhand, Doing business within the family it is not easy. To run the business with good profits need to have high skill and high experience people. The experience, Skills and quick learner people are the key factors in the successive business. In any cases occured within short time they will findout the solution and they will give the good suggestions to improve the business with competitor world. If you need to move on this global simply you need to analyze the new factors how they are used to our business, but i did not think so within the family skill and technical peoples are less. so, these are the main problems when the family within the business.
Doing business within the family has more advantages when all persons with the required skills are there otherwise the business will go down economically and lost the name of the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...mily to have some benefits and problems also. I will explain in brief. One Hand, ...
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
... how they are used to our business, but i did not think so within the family skil...
Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...y skill and technical peoples are less. so, these are the main problems when the f...
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...s when the family within the business.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in brief, in short, in any case, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39100404298 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6111000632 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297812134425 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123400728874 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856162261506 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227671913714 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438683299867 0.056905535591 77% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.