Your friend from another country is interested to visit your hometown Write a letter to her and describe what s the best time to visit How she can enjoy her visit

Dear Sara,

I hope you and your family doing well, I am writing this letter to express my excitement and happiness because finally you are accepted to visit my country India.

In India so many tourist places are there, I noted some great places like Taj Mahal it is the symbol of pure love, Hyderabad is famous for Biryani and IT industry parks and last but not least that is Kerala, Kerala is the greenery and hills place where we can do trekking and Kerala is famous for devotional temples. But, to visit these places the winter season is very good we can enjoy the weather in the winter.

Sara, from all those places Goa is the best place we can enjoy here more a lot. Especially BAGHA beach attracts you so much and near to Goa Blackstone Island is there We can go by that place in Boat and I will arrange the best Seafood for you in that place.

I am looking forward to you

Love
Bhanu

Votes
Average: 7.2 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...nal temples. But, to visit these places the winter season is very good we can enjoy the weather i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39644970414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06557190733 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.858067096 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132865975206 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712726069367 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594261937793 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752916897501 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582067322837 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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