Your friend from another country is interested to visit your hometown Write a letter to her and describe what s the best time to visit How she can enjoy her visit

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Your friend from another country is interested to visit your hometown. Write a letter to her and describe what’s the best time to visit. How she can enjoy her visit

Dear Sally,

Hi, how are you doing there in Germany. I am writing to you because I am excited that you finally accepted my invitation to visit my home country.

I think the best season that you should come is summer since that we can enjoy the picturesque scenery of the Philippines. So basically in this season you can enjoy most of your time here in the Philippines there are lot of places to visit and enjoy. My family are also anxious to meet you since this is the first I am going to introduce you to them.

We could do some mountain trekking on Mount Ulap at Baguio, Benguet, visit some of the ancestral house in Vigan, Ilocos Sur, and we can do an island hopping in Hundred Island at Alaminos, Pangasinan.

If you have any question regarding your stay here in the my country do no hesitate to call me at 1298390183 or email at bill@mail.com.

I look forward seeing you take care.

Best wishes,

Bill

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...on Mount Ulap at Baguio, Benguet, visit some of the ancestral house in Vigan, Ilocos Sur, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Hundred'.
Suggestion: A Hundred
...Sur, and we can do an island hopping in Hundred Island at Alaminos, Pangasinan. If y...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...ny question regarding your stay here in the my country do no hesitate to call me at 12...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, regarding, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48635733335 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5124323904 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158964919263 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671113430104 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665904157979 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717872444448 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497632865763 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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