Studying the English in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age most of the people are studying English in a nation with a lot of native speaker.
But there are other ways on how they can learn that language even though they are not in that continent.
To start with, most of the populace are migrating to other sovereign state which English is the national language. This is to enhance their knowledge and for the advancement of their career That is why they are learning the language of Englishmen to cope up with the natives. Another reason for that is barrier in the dialect because most of the persons living their knows the native language. In order for them to converse with the citizen they to learn mother tongue of that specific province. Which have a great effect on how they would apply for a job, attend to school, or simply by chatting to a friend.
However, individuals who wish to voyage to English speaking countries are studying first in their homeland. Because most of the employers are looking for an individual who has a proficient in that dialect. For example in Great Britain they are in need of a lot of Nurses, but before they can apply they need to first get an overall band score 7 in IELTS. Which is why most of the populace are already in the midst of learning the language of England in order for them to reach their dreams and have a better career.
In conclusion, I concur that learning the language of English in their home country is beneficial and economical for them. It could help them to acquire and understand that language quickly.
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...because most of the persons living their knows the native language. In order for ...
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Suggestion: to mother
...converse with the citizen they to learn mother tongue of that specific province. Which...
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...ool, or simply by chatting to a friend. However, individuals who wish to voyage ...
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... and understand that language quickly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58695652174 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39932777815 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481884057971 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3965007141 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3846153846 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151579307301 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643302300978 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604444758638 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964243855975 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202967900007 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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