Some people do not believe in the benefits of good diet and daily exercise. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people do not believe in the benefits of good diet and daily exercise. To what extent do you agree or disagree

At this moment in time, most of the populace do not consider doing exercises and eating healthy dishes. Which I disagree because doing these kinds of beneficial activities could lengthen the life span of human beings.

To start with, going on a diet does not mean that you are not going to eat all the time. It means that you are going to eat healthy delectable food that could help slowly lessen the people weight. For example, in the Philippines the government are promoting eating healthy viands which gives vitamins and nutrients. Which in time can help build a healthy lifestyle of the citizen and reduce the degenerative diseases that accompanies unhealthy way of living.

Moreover, doing daily exercise could also help the body’s metabolism promotes better sleep, boost energy, and combat illnesses. A lot of the people in this era are living with a bad habit of smoking, drinking alcoholic beverages, and eating unhealthy dishes which in a long run could damage their overall health heavily. Another is that, the percentage of diseases come from vices which most of the individuals tend to patronize. That is why most of the countries are encouraging the public to do exercise at home so that they could counter the negative effects of unhealthy diet in the near future.

In summary, I strongly disagree that most of the populace do not believe the positive effects of good diet and daily exercise. This activities can be use as a pragmatic way to help curb down the diseases that we are encountering and use it as a silver lining to increase the productivity of mankind.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ffects of good diet and daily exercise. This activities can be use as a pragmatic wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in summary, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9037037037 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62371792455 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5827656623 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212507402471 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831504396389 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101121250363 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137538762151 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593483369088 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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