Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Thank them for the holiday and the photos, explain why did not write earlier and invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Harry and Sally,
How are you doing there in New York? I am doing fine here in Amsterdam.
I want to thank you for having me stay at your family house in New York last Christmas. It was an amazing experience for me since it was my first time to visit New York. The photos that I receive was exquisite. The view in Manhattan and Brooklyn was so picturesque and also when we watched an opera in downtown which gave me a goosebumps because of their award winning performance that was one of my unforgettable experience to date.
I am sorry it took me a while to write back to you since I have a lot of errands to go to. Last Thursday I just got accepted as a University Professor in Dutch University in Netherlands. I am already excited at my new job as well as the experiences that I can gather here.
Next month my Aunt Christine is getting married here at our family house. I would like to cordially invite you two to stay here and attend the wedding. You can also bring your pet dog Doug so we can have a nice summer vacation together.
You can reach me at my email bill@mail.com or you can give a call at this phone number 123456789.
Take care and write back soon.
Best wishes,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a goosebump' or simply 'goosebumps'?
Suggestion: a goosebump; goosebumps
...ched an opera in downtown which gave me a goosebumps because of their award winning performa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
...h gave me a goosebumps because of their award winning performance that was one of my unforget...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32158590308 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5396236975 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2311102566 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205752364035 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670530303421 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643477851007 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882483620315 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540479350655 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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