A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
In this day and age, most of the colleges in certain countries are treating their students equally no matter what is their gender. I agree to this notion because this would be beneficial for them to learn and enjoy studying.
To start with, academies are setting rules to their scholars that there would no gender bias that will happen in the premises of the university. Which will give their students an assurance that they would be deal with respect regardless of their gender. Another is that this will have a great effect on how they could learn quickly with the lesson their instructors are giving. As well as their socialization with their fellow scholars would greatly evolve since that they are treating themselves equally.
Moreover, the parents of the students would become at ease since that the safety of their children in the school premises would not be put in to harm. For example, prestigious universities in Canada are doing some extra measures in order for their students feel safe in the premises. There would not be any bullying incident or even fist fighting since the colleges are giving punishment to the persons involve in that kind of situation. So more foreign students are trying to find a schools with that kind of rules and regulation.
In summary, I strongly concur that universities are doing their best to accept students in any subject regardless of their gender. This could be one of the ideal solution that can pragmatically curb the gender bias that is happening in some colleges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ppen in the premises of the university. Which will give their students an assurance t...
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Suggestion:
... since that the safety of their children in the school premises would not be put ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a school' or simply 'schools'?
Suggestion: a school; schools
...ore foreign students are trying to find a schools with that kind of rules and regulation....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, for example, in summary, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91472868217 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50543547086 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.9302447598 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120074420696 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524190921368 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456708098518 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838332821089 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021235244658 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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