You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Describe the situation, explain your problems why it is difficult to work and say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Madam,
I currently reside at the college halls of residence and I am writing to you to request for a change of accommodation.
At this moment, I share a room with Diego Maradona one of the college varsity player in football. Although we get along as a room mate but we have a quite different study pattern. It is difficult for me to study a night since that he is very noisy when sleeping. As well as, he prefers to study at dawn which at that moment I am sleeping this gives both of us a lot of problems when it comes to studying.
It has been 2 weeks since I have arrived here at the college and up until now I cannot cope with this problem. I feel that if this scenario will continue it could have an adverse effect on my grades as well as our friendship might be torn apart.
I would like an accommodation which would be best if we both have the same schedule and same college course so that we would not encounter the same problems before.
I apologize for any inconvenience that this will cause you and I look forward to hearing from you soon with some good news.
Yours sincerely,
Bill Caguioa
Student
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of problems when it comes to studying. It has been 2 weeks since I have arrived...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... encounter the same problems before. I apologize for any inconvenience that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37264150943 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46070488473 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2087708052 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224413236494 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830722208788 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490432664471 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108228172532 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433816563382 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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