It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this day and age, most of the people are living in the cities because of job opportunities. While others think that living in the rural areas are better.
To start with, professionals tend to reside in the metropolis because a lot of opportunities. Especially when it comes to their career and also some thinks that there are a lot of places to visit when they get bored. For example, here in the Philippines most of the fresh graduate students migrate to the capital city which is Manila because most of the prestigious companies are in there. Another is the that there a lot of local spots to visit and enjoy their rest day like the Venice Canal in Taguig City or they could visit Intramuros which they could learn the past culture and heritage of their country. So more young adults tend to choose living in city center nowadays since that there are a lot of perks that they enjoy when they stay.
However, traditional individuals think that it is expensive to live in the cities. So they tend to choose the rural areas. Although there a lot of job vacancies in the metropolis the cost of living there is so high. Which is one of the main reason they are choosing to stay in rural areas rather than in urban areas. Moreover, the populace are also considering the traffic congestion in the big cities since that there a lot of people working there which means that in rush hour streets would be full of vehicles going to their respective work. Which could give the working adults a lot of stress going to work as well as returning to their respective houses.
In summary, I agree that working in the metropolis is beneficial since that there are a lot of opportunities. Specifically in career advancement as well as for leisure and entertainment when some people want to enjoy their vacation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, for example, in summary, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6292834891 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54770004446 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445482866044 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5043892482 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990342351608 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432465218188 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661140669161 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862702715736 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082312183385 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.