Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern school. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, most of the children are obedient because their educators are teaching them correct manners. Some thinks that this should be taught beforehand at their respective houses with their parents.
To start with, educational institution are concentrating on the well being of each student that have enrolled to them. For example, in Japan most of the lecturers their are educating their scholars in terms of manners and politeness to be apply when they grow older. Another thing is that they are also teaching them to follow the rules and regulation of their schools and country that is why most of the students in Japan are well behave and they follow instructions carefully since it was taught to them at an early age.
However, the traditional people are contemplating this idea since education starts from home. Which implies that the parents should be the one to nurture and prepare their offspring so that they could be well discipline when they become an adult. Moreover the populace are also keen to the raising their child like here in the Philippines most of the parents here are the one in-charge of educating and giving disciplinary action when their child commits a mistake. Which in time gives a positive effect on the well being and character of that person.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that educating children to be a discipline individual should start from their parents. In order for them to be a well balance and goodhearted person to other people when they become an adult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, well, another thing, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92217898833 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57495839882 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505836575875 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9410027685 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159043595452 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736400461374 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563109565547 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119037345691 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509372064717 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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