Your friend from another country is interested to visit your hometown. Write a letter to her and describe what’s the best time to visit. How she can enjoy her visit
Dear Sally,
Hi, how are you doing there in Germany. I am writing to you because I am excited that you finally accepted my invitation to visit my home country.
I think the best season that you should come is summer since that we can enjoy the picturesque scenery of the Philippines. So basically in this season you can enjoy most of your time here in the Philippines there are lot of places to visit and enjoy. My family are also anxious to meet you since this is the first I am going to introduce you to them.
We could do some mountain trekking on Mount Ulap at Baguio, Benguet, visit some of the ancestral house in Vigan, Ilocos Sur, and we can do an island hopping in Hundred Island at Alaminos, Pangasinan.
If you have any question regarding your stay here in the my country do no hesitate to call me at 1298390183 or email at bill@mail.com.
I look forward seeing you take care.
Best wishes,
Bill
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...on Mount Ulap at Baguio, Benguet, visit some of the ancestral house in Vigan, Ilocos Sur, a...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Hundred'.
Suggestion: A Hundred
...Sur, and we can do an island hopping in Hundred Island at Alaminos, Pangasinan. If y...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...ny question regarding your stay here in the my country do no hesitate to call me at 12...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48635733335 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5124323904 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158964919263 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671113430104 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665904157979 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717872444448 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497632865763 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.